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Can someone proof read this descriptive paragraph for me PLEASEE


Can Someone Proof Read This Descriptive Paragraph For Me PLEASEE class=

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silencewolf

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proof read? btw love it it was beutifull

dg12345637

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I like it a lot but I think you should not put dust into many times like where you said it blew in him mouth and nose. Leave that but get rid of the very next sentence or if you don fix it so that it makes sense.

Just trying to help. :)

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