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help with this plz...

proofread this email and correct the 5 errors related to the end-of-sentence punctuation or capital letters.

Dear Ms Parmar,

I am writing to you to ask for your help!

As you know, keeping up to date with children's health policies is a key part of my role as an apprentice
nursery nurse, it is important for me to have access to the policies online whilst I am at work.

Unfortunately, due to an IT fault, my workplace access to the internet is blocked at the moment.

I would be grateful if you could look into this as soon as possible? It is preventing me from doing myjob
properly, and I worry that I will fall behind in my placement if it continues for much longer.

I look forward to hearing from you!

Kind regards,

Charlotte​

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benmartin

Hello, I made my edits in bold. :)

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Dear Ms. Parmar,   -Error #1: Add a period after "Ms."

I am writing to you to ask for your help!

As you know, keeping up to date with children's health policies is a key part of my role as an apprentice nursery nurse. It is important for me to have access to the policies online whilst I am at work. -Error #2: Change the comma after nurse to a period, and capitalize "it."

Unfortunately, due to an IT fault, my workplace access to the Internet is blocked at the moment. -Error #3: Capitalize "Internet."

I would be grateful if you could look into this as soon as possible.  -Error #4: Change the question mark after "possible" to a period.

It is preventing me from doing my job properly, and I worry that I will fall behind in my placement if it continues for much longer. -Error #5: Add a space in between "my" and "job."

I look forward to hearing from you!

Kind regards,

Charlotte​

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