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What should I change? Also don’t worry about the first and last paragraph.

What Should I Change Also Dont Worry About The First And Last Paragraph class=

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Explanation:

You repeated what the theme is like more than 5 times. It should not be the transition sentence as well as the start of the paragraph. Vary the ways the start and end your paragraphs.

You should have 3 pieces of evidence of your theme. Start with that instead of repeating your theme

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