Hii tell me what yall think about this assignment I have to do it's about the book hatchet if I need to change anything please tell me Body paragraph 1

First, In the beginning, Brian was scared and didn't know how to take care of himself, and he was scared because he didn't have anything else to rely on except for him and a hatchet. Brian was always thinking about how his mother cheated and that took him to mind off of things that were more important like his safety or how he was gonna eat some type of food. When Brian first got into the woods he was scared and cold and all torn up and he was hurt. The text states ¨he was also weak. Just the walk around the back of the ridge and the slight climb over the top had left his legs rubbery. Brian was hurt, he could barely walk and he was still hurt from the plane crash. But When he started to get used to it and at that point knew what to do when seeing a wild animal he was a pro when he encounters wild animals









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Besides, Brian was upset in the beginning because his mother cheating on his father and forcing a divorce. Brian matures through his new ability to be patient. Setbacks that would have immobilized the "old Brian," the Brian at the start of the novel, later become manageable. He learns to control his temper when he realizes that his frustration and hopelessness does not help his family situation. He learns theirs nothing he can do but he knows he's gonna have to live with it. Once Brian learned that he could do nothing he started worrying about some more important things like how he was going to eat and about his safety