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many professional athlete and entertainers earn large sums of money. do you agree or disagree with these individuals making high salaries?

Entertainers continue to be admired and supported by the media, they get paid in high amounts. A debate has sprouted, this of which is if these athletes and entertainers should get paid as much as they do.
There are multiple reasons why they shouldn’t get to rule over everyone, anyone may have these talents and they could be even better, there are way more important jobs, and not everyone is who they seem to be.

There are people you pass in the streets or maybe in your hallways, that have the potential to be an amazing entertainer but will never get the chance. These entertainers will take your money and never feel bad, hence why their merchandise is expensive. We feed them constantly, they don’t even have to have a personality or to be that good at football, just as long as they flash a toothy grin.


The individuals that you love and support aren’t always good people. Many artists have been exposed for horrible activities, things they said in the past or present. Their actions don’t go unreviewed, that is of course if you admire them. Your admiration shields your brain from this information, you don’t want to believe that they are bad people. Even if they haven't been canceled that just means they are wearing a mask, you don’t know them, they see us as just a number.

How do you even know of these people? The internet is produced by electricians, they give you so many things its why your food stays good, why you can use your lights. That seems pretty important to me, but no, the untalented get more. What about doctors, they only get paid 73,000 a year while influencers get paid 250,000. Social media is not a life or death job, doctors have that job though. They make sure you are healthy, and save you.