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If there are any errors then please tell me. Grade my Tanka Poem:
Food makes me really happy
The amazing flavor rushes through my mouth
I just want to eat
I love eating food all day long
I’m in my happy place while eating

Sagot :

dgales528

Answer: It’s alright.

Explanation:

A tanka poem is 5 lines with 5/7 words:

Line 1: 5 words

Line 2: 7 words

Line 3: 5 words

Line 4: 7 words

Line 5 7 words

So far I don’t see any grammar mistakes.

This is an option but maybe replace some words with new ones? (You don’t have to do that btw). For example, you could replace “really” with words like undeniably, awfully, and certainly.

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