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hey guys! :)
I really want an opinion on this poem so plz let me know. I will not be hurt If you dont like it, I need honest feedback.

the sound of the world being so still
and so quiet
the purest of water becoming one within itself
all chaos gone
nothing but peace drifting away with the wind.
the fire sparking its energy through the air.
searching for the lost the creature below looking for freedom
looking for the right way
being lost at sea
wondering what's to come
to have adventures
to finding an island with history
for we are home at last


Sagot :

Answer:

Okay I'm being honest, I really like this poem. I don't know if the world is so quiet rn lol but overall it is a very good poem!

Kind Regards,

Have a wonderful rest of your day!

I love it honestly but I would make some changes to it so it’ll give the readers chills as they read the poem
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