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It was Christmas, and as usual, my dad was working in the basement. He is a scientist and has his laboratory down there. For the last few months, he did not let me go in there. I don't know why since I always go there and help him.
My dad is my best friend, I don't have any friends at school, and I get bored easily, so I enjoy spending time with him. He always has the craziest ideas. Maybe now he is working on a crazy one, and he doesn't want me to see it.
As the evening came, my mom called my dad for dinner. She and my sister Susan have been working on it all day, and it looked delicious. After we ate, we opened our presents. I must say that mine was in a big red box. I had no idea of what it could be. As I opened it, I remember the excitement on my father's face. I could not believe what it was, a robot!.
As I turned it on, it said -hi Carol, my name is Sunny, and I am your new best friend- then it looked at my father and said -oh, hello creator, you look good-
I played with Sunny till I went to sleep. The next day, I went with Sunny to play outside, when some of my classmates passed by my house and saw Sunny and me. They started to laugh and make fun of me. They called me the crazy girl and her crazy golden can.
As the days passed, they continued to make fun of me and my precious robot. I ignored them and kept playing with Sunny.
One day, all the kids were playing basketball in the park when one of them fell to the ground and scraped his knee very badly. He started to cry, and Sunny approached him. Form its chest, it took a first aid kit and started to clean his knee. After that, Sunny gave him a lollipop.
The kid, who has always made fun of me, stopped his crying and said - Guys Carol, and her friend are very cool! I want them on my team!-
From that day on, I have lots of friends, but my best one is Sunny, thanks to it, I have lots of friends and fun. Sunny was my dad's best creation.
Explanation:
In this story, the elements that we can find are:
- The characters. They are mainly Carol, her father, and her classmates.
- The setting. It is when we introduce Carol and how her life is.
- The begging of the story. It is in the first paragraphs when Carol opens her present and then plays with it.
- The conflict. It is Carol not having friends and the children making fun of her.
- The resolution. It is when Sunny helps the injured kid, and he tells that Carol is cool.
