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Learning Real World Problems in School


In school we are only taught reading, math, history, science, and music. But we do not learn about things that are needed to be a successful citizen, such as learning to do taxes and being able to rent a home to live in. Instead, we are stuck learning about things that won’t be very useful in the long run. I’m not sure how creating a song for music class is gonna help me buy a house. It just doesn’t seem very logical, honestly. I mean, school is made for the teaching of future adults. If we don’t teach them the basic human needs of society, then how will people ever mature? They don’t teach us things such as finances and student loans, which are common issues in today's society. However, people may say that if you are focused on a certain job, such as a historian or a mathematician, then I can see how these subjects that school is teaching right now could be helpful to you. But what if you want to have just any job that will pay good money? School doesn’t teach you how to get a job, so you will just be stuck trying to figure it out on your own. When you are left to figure things out on your own, you may get things wrong and be confused. Some may say that our parents are meant to teach us these topics, but some people do not have an able parent to assist them. A common argument is that we would learn these things later in life, yet when you are young and learn things at a young age they would stay in our mind for a long time. Our school motto is “Work Hard. Go to College. Change the World. ” To be able to change the world we need to be good citizens first.