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When reading this I thought the author could make this sudden with the actions from Bella that would create the surprise and while bringing it by pieces of suspenseful for the readers both at the same time. I liked the way people used the name Bella in a letter which brings surprises to her because it creates this thought of her special to someone. “I bend to retrieve it, surprised to see “My Bella” scrawled ornately across the front.” The author foreshadows this flashback of what had happened earlier in this short story.
Also, the author states in the story “I look past him, but Abuela gasps and exclaims, “Alejandro, after all these years!” The author built both what was surprising and the feeling of this story's climax. I thought when the author uses this foreshadowing, he had made the main character show both emotion and express herself throughout the short story with the climax. The small number of actions like this when Bella thought she may recognize who is writing to, build her thinking or show foreshadows of the past and then she acquired surprise as when she notices who is likely writing to her.
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KizzyOwO and sociocynical.
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Try rewriting the words so It does not seem copied.
