I WROTE A POEM, TELL ME HOW IT IS!!!

She is like a beautiful butterfly shining bright, I am a miracle flower that bloomed at night... The moon was hiding behind the clouds, shining like diamonds in the sky.... Now there she stood amongst the beauty.... flying about in royalty... I looked at her in admiration, which had caused in my heart a sudden hesitation... She landed upon me smooth... and I had fallen in love with her, that is the truth.... There was a happiness settled upon my heart as she enjoyed herself … but it didn't last long... The glowing sun had raised above and in the amongst the pink sky bloomed the golden flower... One that was better than me, in everyway.... within just a few feet away he stood, dazzling and pleasing to one's soothing eyes... She flew away right then and settled upon him... and made him her everlasting love.... Time went by and it became night, but it was one with the absence of the moon... and I too had began to crumple down with pain in my heart, but with joy filled upon the core of earth.. at least next time, I might be able to burn along with it in happiness... but for now, I was just some piece of dirt