Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow
and writing style of a story?
A. Harold woke up in his sleeping bag. He heard a noise outside the
tent. An owl hooted twice in a row. Harold heard the owl again one
more time. Harold lay down in his sleeping bag.
B. Harold woke up. He heard a noise outside the tent: an owl hooting.
He heard it again. Frightened, Harold shrank down in his sleeping
bag and shivered.
C. Harold woke up. He heard a noise. An owl hooted. Harold heard it
again. Harold lay down in his sleeping bag.
D. Harold woke up, and he heard a noise, which was an owl hooting.
Harold heard it again, and it was the sound of an owl hooting.
Harold lay down in his sleeping bag, and he tried to sleep.