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can anyone add more things to this poem like more details

The man walked across the
ground waiting for the very found sound he waits for triumphs when it is done for he has taken a flower gun the flower screams in pain and falls petals revolving in metal bars


Sagot :

Answer:

i dont really know the context of the poem but just try adding adjectives

Explanation:

I took a more sad approach:

The old, frail man trudged across the

cold dead ground simply waiting for the very familair and found sound

he simply waits for the hopeful triumphs when it is done

he has taken a rose gun the rose

shreiks in agony and slowly falls its delicate petals

revolving in dark metal bars