Li-Young is writing a suspense story for a local summer camp’s evening fireside program. This is his first paragraph.

The old house next door had been empty for years. Ginny couldn’t remember a time when anyone had lived there. Then, one night, she heard noises coming from the house. When she glanced out her window, she thought she saw something move in one of the upstairs rooms. She decided to investigate and went to wake up her brother.

How should Li-Young revise this paragraph to elaborate on specific ideas in the text?

A.
He should explain what Ginny knows about the house next door.
B.
He should give more exact facts and details about the house’s location.
C.
He should use more precise words and details to describe what Ginny saw and heard.
D.
He should provide readers with more background information about Ginny, her brother, and their family.