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Read the sentence.
Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at
Yankee Stadium in the Bronx.
Which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?

In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. He was
thirty-seven years old.
• In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees. At Yankee Stadium in the Bronx, he was
thirty-seven years old.
• Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old playing at
Yankee Stadium. In the Bronx.
Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. In the Bronx at Yankee Stadium in 2011.