Read the sentence.
Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at
Yankee Stadium in the Bronx.
Which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?
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In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. He was
thirty-seven years old.
• In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees. At Yankee Stadium in the Bronx, he was
thirty-seven years old.
• Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old playing at
Yankee Stadium. In the Bronx.
Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. In the Bronx at Yankee Stadium in 2011.