Using your topic idea above, give me an example of how you can use figurative language or sensory details to improve your essay.

Example: Think about where your topic occurred. What did it smell like? What did it look like? What did it feel like? If we're writing about a football game, what did the grass and ball feel like? What did the line of scrimmage smell like? What did the field sound like? The wet grass crunched underneath my feet as I barreled for the endzone, tightly carrying the coarse football. Sweat streamed down my face. Or was it the steady rain? I could hear people screaming: "Go! Go! Go!"