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The writer is considering deleting the underlined portion of sentence 8 (reproduced below), adjusting the punctuation as needed

But, as Featherstone shows, focus groups actually rejected some features that spelled the Edsel’s doom, including the name, which group members thought “sounded too much like ‘weasel.’”

Should the writer keep or delete the underlined text?