Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.
1 It may have seemed like an ordinary day to everyone
else, but to me, it couldn't have been further from it. 2
Today was my first day working as a waitress at Pete's
Pizza Haven, and I could not have been more excited. 3
In fact, I was so excited that I rushed to get ready much
faster than I typically do. 4 "I'm ready to go!" I shouted,
bouncing down the stairs and flying into the kitchen,
where my mom was making breakfast. 5 "I have so
much to learn and don't want to be late," I declared for
emphasis. My mom just grinned and placed a
steaming plate of eggs before me.
Which should be added after sentence 6 to most
effectively move the plot forward?
O The excitement of my new job started to wane, and I
began to reconsider if this was truly how I wanted to
spend my summer.
O Once I arrived, I quickly learned that my job would
also entail wiping tables, mopping floors, and washing
dishes.
OI gulped down my food, grabbed my bus card, and
pecked my mother on the cheek as I raced out the
door.
As I think back on my first job, I remember the many
mistakes I made and the important lessons I learned.
