Read through your peers' posts carefully and provide feedback on these areas: What, in your words, is this paragraph about? Are there any sentences or ideas that fall outside the main topic? If so, which ones? How are quotes or paraphrases used to support your peer's ideas? Would your peer's audience find these to be convincing, or is more evidence needed? What words or strategies does your peer use to appeal to their audience? Are there any ways in which the writer could engage the reader more? How does your peer lead the reader from one idea to the next? Did you get a little lost anywhere? If so, where did you get lost? What might help your peer overcome the challenges they faced?