The hollow the universe
The more struggle we face,
The more our hearts feel heavy and burdened
The painful things that happens in our life
Is like a flash light
That lightens up the dark room.
The happier the people are from the outside
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Are more depressed and sad fm the inside
Not Unwilling to do anything,
But just want to sit alone in a corner and cry
Where no one can see them;
And, smile happily after crying,
So that all others think that,
Everything is going all right.
can u correct all the punctuactions and add where needed . and also can u guys give a suitable title for the poem ??​